glitterburn: (TVXQ: HoMin one night in Bangkok)
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Title: Let Go
Fandom: TVXQ
Pairing: Yunho/Changmin
Rating: NC17
Summary: Changmin wants something. Yunho isn’t sure he can give it.
Notes: For [livejournal.com profile] haeym's watersports prompt on the kink meme.


Let Go

“Yunho,” Changmin says one evening. “Yunho, I want you to pee on me.”

Perhaps he should have picked a better moment. This kind of announcement is probably not best delivered in the middle of food preparation. Certainly not judging by Yunho’s reaction, which is a strangled squawk as the vegetable knife slips off the half-dome of an onion and slices through flesh.

“Shit. I mean—uh. Oh.” Yunho snatches his hand away from the knife and stares at the welling bead of blood.

“Run it under the tap,” Changmin says patiently, accustomed to his boyfriend’s clumsiness. “Here.” He takes Yunho’s wrist, guides him over to the sink, turns on the tap, then shoves Yunho’s injured finger beneath the stream of cold water.

They stand there for a moment, Changmin’s hand still around Yunho’s wrist, and then Yunho pulls free. “It’s fine now. Thanks.” He darts a sidelong glance, a flush on his cheeks as he looks-but-doesn’t-look at Changmin.

Sometimes Yunho can be so shy. Changmin likes that about him; likes that the fearless leader—ha!—can be so uncertain. He’s not prudish, not exactly. His mind fits certain paths and he excels in what he does along those paths, but sometimes Changmin thinks Yunho should... experiment a little more.

Especially if he, Changmin, gets to be the beneficiary.

Yunho holds his finger to his mouth and licks at the cut, rapid and kittenish. He sends Changmin a few more glances. “Um, what did you say just now?”

Changmin takes it as a challenge, even though Yunho’s expression is wary and non-combative. “You heard me perfectly well. I want you to pee on me.”

“That’s what I thought you said.” Yunho examines his finger then just stands there, as if he’s not sure what to do with his hands now. “Why?”

“Do I need a reason?” Changmin raises his eyebrows.

Yunho lifts one shoulder in an awkward shrug. “I guess not. But...”

Changmin turns off the tap and resumes making dinner. Discussions of intimate matters, he’s found, usually have a positive outcome when distraction is involved. The most effective distraction is sex, but he doubts that’ll work this time. Cooking will have to do instead.

He’s unpeeling the papery casing from a clove of garlic when Yunho shuffles back over. Picking up the knife, Yunho prods at the onion like he’s giving it acupuncture. Changmin stifles a sigh and takes over the task, chopping and dicing with practised ease.

“Why?” Yunho asks again.

There are many reasons, not least Because I want you to. Mixed up in that is Because I think it’ll feel nice along with Because I want you to put your scent all over me, but mainly it’s all about Because I want to see you let go. Changmin doesn’t say any of this. Instead he says, “Because of some porno I watched.”

Yunho lays both hands on the kitchen counter. “Oh.”

“Boil the kettle.”

“What?”

“The kettle.” Changmin points in the appropriate direction. “I need hot water to blanch the tomatoes.”

“Right. I thought... Never mind.” Yunho busies himself with filling the kettle and switching it on. “What porno was this?”

Changmin is starting to wish he hadn’t broached the subject. He’d wanted a yes or no answer, not twenty questions as to his motivations. Any minute now Yunho will invite him to lie on the couch and try to give him therapy or something.

“You haven’t seen it,” he says shortly.

“Maybe I should. So I know. You know, so I know what to do.”

Changmin stares at him. “Please tell me you’re potty-trained.”

Yunho blushes, then laughs, and although it’s uncertain, embarrassed laughter, it’s still laughter and that’s a good thing. He ducks his head. “You know what I mean.”

The onion and garlic get tipped into a saucepan over a low heat. Changmin wipes his hands down the side of his jeans and reaches out, curling a finger beneath Yunho’s chin to make him look up. “It’s no big deal if you don’t want to do it. I want you to enjoy it, too.”

Yunho gazes at him. “You really want me to do that?”

“Yes. Really.” Changmin lets his hand drop. The kettle judders across the bench, bubbles roiling, steam clouding from the spout. He takes it off the boil and pours the hot water into another pan on top of the tomatoes. “Just think about it, okay?”

“I’m thinking.”

“But don’t think too much.”

“Okay.” Yunho wrinkles his nose. “It’s just... it seems...”

“It’s not dirty,” Changmin says, anticipating that line of argument. “Some people advocate drinking urine for health reasons.”

Maybe he shouldn’t have mentioned that, because now Yunho is staring at him with an expression halfway between appalled and amused.

“It’s really not dirty,” Changmin says again, using the knife to poke at the tomatoes. The skins are peeling free of the flesh. “And it’s not deviant, either. It’s just... specialised.”

Yunho takes a breath and exhales. “I’ll think about it.”

*

Giving Yunho time to think about anything is usually a bad idea. Changmin watches him considering the proposition. Actually, was it even a proposition? It was more of a statement. Or a demand. Whatever. For the rest of the evening, Yunho sits curled up with a cushion in his lap, worrying at his lower lip with his teeth as he stares blankly at the television. He’s obviously still thinking about it when he goes to bed. Stands to reason it’ll still be on his mind first thing in the morning.

Changmin counts on it.

They don’t always sleep together, a state of affairs both frustrating and satisfying. Changmin wakes early and lies in his bed, listening, convinced that Yunho will have been awake half the night thinking. The alarm clock shrills next door, then it’s silenced. Changmin sits up, pushing back the duvet. He hears Yunho shuffling around, then the click of the bedroom door, footsteps, and Yunho yawning as he wanders towards the bathroom.

As soon as the bathroom door closes, Changmin springs from his bed and bolts out of his room. He shoves at the bathroom door—Yunho never locks it—and strides in.

“Changmin!” Yunho is standing at the toilet. He makes an entirely useless attempt to cover himself, trying to shove his dick back inside his underwear.

Changmin rolls his eyes. “Seen it all before.”

“Yes, but it’s different now.” Yunho is blushing.

“Different because I asked you to pee on me?” Changmin turns on the tap in the sink. He doesn’t open it halfway, as is his usual habit. He just lets the water dribble and spurt, and he watches Yunho blush even redder.

“Turn that off,” Yunho says. “Please.”

“Sure.” Point made, Changmin silences the tap. He leans against the sink and huffs, making a circling gesture with his hand. “Hurry up, will you? I need to go, too.”

Yunho gives him a doubtful look and moves around the toilet until his back is to Changmin. There’s the rustle of clothing. Then nothing.

Changmin folds his lips together, trying not to laugh. He steps forward, going right into Yunho’s space and pressing up against his body. Yunho is tense, breathing fast. No wonder he can’t go. Performance anxiety is a bitch.

“Come on,” Changmin says, sliding his arms around Yunho’s waist. He rubs his right hand low over Yunho’s belly, stroking a heavy caress in slow circles. His left hand rests at Yunho’s hip, safe and non-threatening. He nuzzles into the razored softness of hair at Yunho’s nape. “C’mon, baby. Do it.”

“Don’t,” Yunho gasps. “Changmin, no. I can’t. I’ll... I’ll get hard and—”

“Think of boring things.” Changmin licks a wet line down the back of Yunho’s neck, then blows on it.

Yunho writhes. “How can I think of boring things when you’re kissing my neck!”

“Have some self-control.”

“Thought you wanted me to lose control.”

“Not exactly.” Changmin whispers more kisses up the side of Yunho’s throat, then bites at his earlobe. “Mm. You can do it. Let me help.” He creeps his left hand down from Yunho’s hip and curls it around his cock.

Yunho makes a strangled sound. “Yeah, that’s really going to help me take a piss. Is that how you hold yours? Don’t aim it there. That’s not... Fuck.” His tone of complaint wavers. “Changminnie, I really need to pee. Please let me do this on my own.”

Changmin smiles against his neck. “Are you embarrassed?”

“No.” Yunho is practically glowing with shame. “Yes. I don’t know.”

“You’ve done it in front of me before.”

“Not like this!”

“Is it the sound it makes when it goes all splish-splash?” Changmin asks, trying to sound loving and considerate. “Want me to turn the tap on again?”

“No. No.” Urgency tints Yunho’s voice. “You’re being mean.”

“I’m not. I’m just waiting my turn. You’re taking ages. You must be desperate by now.” Changmin rubs over Yunho’s belly again, exerting gentle pressure on his bladder.

Yunho jerks backwards. “Shim Changmin!”

“Just take a leak already, will you?” Changmin says, heaving a long-suffering sigh. “I honestly don’t want to stand here all day holding your dick.”

“I’m not forcing you,” Yunho says. “Just reminding you, it’s totally your choice.”

“Mm.” Changmin bends his head and bites Yunho’s bare shoulder, does it sharp and hard. At the same time he presses the heel of his hand down over Yunho’s bladder.

Yunho yelps and lets go. A stream of pee arcs into the toilet bowl, strong and steady. Changmin makes a pleased sound and urges his hand along the length of Yunho’s cock. “Don’t stop,” he murmurs, breathing in the rich, sharp smell hot from Yunho’s body. “Oh, baby, don’t stop.”

Yunho squirms in his arms, face flaming, but there’s the uncomplicated pleasure of relief in his expression and he’s smiling, embarrassed and awkward.

“Doesn’t that feel good?” Changmin asks, low and sweet, coaxing out the last few droplets. “Imagine how much better it’ll feel when you do it all over me. I want it, Yun. I really want it.”

He gives Yunho’s cock a little shake; runs his thumb over the tip. Then he lifts his hand to his mouth and licks it.

Yunho makes a shocked sound, staring at him.

Changmin smiles, then leans forward and flushes the toilet.

*

A few days later, Changmin comes home to find Yunho sitting in front of the television. Two empty beer bottles are on the floor. He’s almost finished the contents of a third bottle.

“Have a drink,” he says.

Changmin shakes his head. “I’m good, thanks.”

“No.” Yunho looks at him, almost pleading. “Have a drink.”

It takes Changmin a moment, but then he realises what might—might—be about to happen, and he says, “Oh. Right. Why not. I’m kind of thirsty, actually.” He goes into the kitchen, opens the fridge, and takes out two bottles. He uncaps them both, then returns to the living room, offering one to Yunho. “I got you another. In case you need it.”

“Thanks.” Yunho appears to be stone-cold sober. It’s only the slight pinking over his cheeks and the slow, careful way he raises the bottle to his lips that suggest otherwise. He finishes the third bottle and starts on the fourth.

Changmin lifts his own beer and takes a swig. It’s cool and smooth on his tongue, a clean taste. He settles into an armchair and watches Yunho watching the television.

Yunho is nervous but determined. When he’s in this kind of mood, he goes almost completely still. It’s pretty close to the way he behaves when they’re working, when he’s preparing for a live performance: shut down and focused, imagining a successful outcome long before they take to the stage. He sinks into himself then, in those moments when he doesn’t have to acknowledge anyone else’s hopes or expectations, but Changmin knows that’ll come, and he doesn’t want it on those terms.

“Yunho.” Changmin puts down his beer and goes over to the couch, kneels on the floor and takes the bottle from Yunho’s hand. “Not like this.”

Yunho blinks at him. “I want to give you what you want.”

Changmin catches Yunho’s hand and rubs his cheek against it. “I want you to want it, too.”

Defeat sags the resolute set of Yunho’s shoulders. “I’m not sure. It seems...”

“Degrading? Humiliating?” Changmin tilts his head and smiles. “It’s not. It won’t be. Not between us.”

Yunho bites his lip. He’s still uncertain, but there’s something in his eyes, an expression that suggests he’s not entirely averse to the idea. Changmin just needs to push a little harder. Maybe it’s time to be honest, because while Yunho’s been thinking about it, so has Changmin; and now he’s ready to give answers to the question Yunho is no longer asking.

“I want it,” Changmin says softly. “I want the warmth of it, hot and fresh. I want what was inside of you to splash all over me. I want the scent of it. I want to be covered in it, as if you’re marking me. Like a possessive thing, like animals do. It’s sexy, Yun. It’s so sexy, being claimed in such a primal way.”

He pauses, conscious of his arousal, tight and insistent. Changmin laughs. “God, look at me. We’re just talking about it and I’m hard.”

Yunho strokes a hand through Changmin’s hair, ruffling it into his eyes. “Any other reason?”

“Yes.” Changmin tosses his head and meets Yunho’s gaze. “I really want to see you do it. That’s going to be the biggest turn-on of all. I want to see you let go, and in more than a sexual way. I want to see you let go for me, because I asked you to, because you want to.”

There’s a long silence.

“Okay.” Yunho slides his hand down to Changmin’s shoulder. He smiles. “Okay. Let’s do it.”

A fluttering of nerves wakens in Changmin. “Now?”

“Yeah. Now.”

They go into the bathroom. Yunho is slightly unsteady on his feet, the kick of the alcohol finally catching up with him. Changmin enjoys the chance to fuss over him a little, undressing in haste and then taking Yunho’s clothes off with slow deliberation and excited anticipation. He kisses Yunho, brushes his mouth over lips, neck, chest.

“Don’t,” Yunho warns, “don’t turn me on.”

“Sorry.” Changmin pulls away. He climbs into the bath by the taps and kneels there, cock stiff, balls hanging low between his thighs. His erection dips a little at the hard chill of the ceramic tub and the cold, uncomfortable touch of the taps against his back. The position is painful without any padding under his knees, but he doesn’t want to get out and fetch a towel. He doesn’t dare spoil this moment.

Yunho hesitates a second longer before stepping into the bath. He puts one hand flat against the tiled wall and stands right at the far end of the tub, then shuffles closer, edges backwards, and moves forwards again as if he’s calculating distances. There’s probably some sort of mathematical equation for working out the correct position for a man to stand in order to achieve optimum flow and pressure when he pees on his boyfriend. Changmin swallows the laughter that threatens to shake itself free at the thought. He doesn’t want Yunho to think he’s laughing at him.

Instead he fixes his gaze on Yunho’s cock. It’s long and thick, his balls heavy, framed by the dark brush of pubic hair. Changmin’s mouth waters. He wants to lean forwards and snuffle through that hair, wants to nuzzle at Yunho’s balls and roll them on his tongue, wants to lick and lick at Yunho’s cock until he’s huge and stiff and making Changmin moan around it.

“Don’t look at me like that,” Yunho says, taking his cock in hand. He’s blushing and flustered and absolutely adorable. “This is difficult enough as it is. You’re naked and hard and now you’re looking at me like you want to...”

“Don’t think about it.” Changmin sits back as Yunho’s dick starts to swell and lift. “No! Don’t get turned on!”

“I’m trying not to.” Yunho draws in a deep breath and looks at the tiles on the wall. His jaw tightens and he goes all tense, then takes a few more calming breaths. After a while, he blinks. “Wow, it’s kind of cold in here. I really need to pee.”

“Yes,” Changmin coaxes. “Give it to me.”

“Don’t say anything!” Yunho shifts on his feet, jiggles up and down a little, his nose scrunching. “Ohhh, I really need to go. Oh, Changminnie. I don’t know. I don’t know if I can.”

Please, Changmin thinks. For me. Do it for me.

A blush burning across his face, Yunho shakes his head forward until his hair hangs in his eyes. He sways forward onto his toes. Quivers. “Oh God. Oh.”

The first spurt splashes out. Changmin scoots closer, excitement scrambling through him as the droplets land on his knee, hot and wet.

“Oh,” Yunho says again, screwing his eyes shut tight for an agonised moment, “oh, baby,” and he lets go.

Changmin gasps and arches against the jet of liquid, tilting his head back as long, deep shudders go through him like an orgasm. “Yes,” he says, high and excited, “oh yes, yes, give me everything, let me take it, oh—”

Yunho stares down at him, directing the warm, trickling stream all over him, up Changmin’s thighs, over his cock and balls and into his pubic hair, up over his belly and his arms and chest, soaking him, making him wet and dripping.

Changmin twists on his knees and moans, racked by a savage pulse of lust. Spiked by Yunho’s wide-eyed gaze, Changmin palms his dick, begs, “More, more, cover me,” and jerks off, his hand wet, cock glistening. Yunho’s scent surrounds him, hot and sharp. Changmin utters frantic cries, urging himself on. He has to do this fast, reeling from the punch of desire; faster, faster; and as Yunho finally finishes, dick still held in his hand, Changmin sways forward and takes him in his mouth, working his own cock harder and harder.

Sensation dizzies him. The salty taste of Yunho’s pee on his tongue. The softness of his cock. The smell of him, musky and warm. Changmin moans, pulling himself on. He needs to come. He needs to give Yunho this. Letting Yunho’s dick slip free of his mouth, Changmin turns his head. He leans against Yunho’s thigh, Yunho’s hands in his hair now, stroking so gently.

“Come,” Yunho says, fingers tightening in command. “Come for me, Changminnie. Let go.”

Changmin gasps, presses his lips to Yunho’s skin, and climaxes in a hot, jerking rush.

His head is spinning, his breathing heavy and fractured, perspiration already cooling over his body. He shivers.

Yunho crouches in front of him, kisses his cheek, his nose, his mouth. “Was that good? Was it what you wanted?”

“Yes.” Another shiver. Changmin’s voice cracks. “Thank you.”

“So polite, Changminnie.” Yunho smiles.

They’re in a trickling, cooling mess of urine and semen. Changmin snorts with laughter and clings to Yunho. “I think we need a shower.”

“Good idea,” Yunho says, still smiling. “And then you’re going to clean the bath.”

Changmin grins. It’s a small price to pay.




Date: 2012-10-16 05:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] haeym.livejournal.com
s-s-spot

Date: 2012-11-08 08:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] haeym.livejournal.com
There’s probably some sort of mathematical equation for working out the correct position for a man to stand in order to achieve optimum flow and pressure when he pees on his boyfriend.
This is me, I always start to think about hilarious stuff during intimate intercourses so I couldn't help but laugh out loud when I read this. 'D

But wow, so different from what I had written! :D But not in a bad way of course and it does respond to the idea I gave for you hahaha. Yunho was deliciously hesitant and reserved in this one, not what we usually see but definitely not out of character I think.

And needy Changdola! As well as sneaky. (I agree with diagon's comment about all the water and liquid references, so subtle *___*) I love how you kept him away from being a whiny little girl but still having needs to satisfy. And his ultimate motive is very thoughtful and deep and somehow very Changmin too. /(* v *)\

HOT.

SO VERY HOT.

Totally satisfied my watersports kink. Uhh. Also this is probably my weirdest kink too and I have even no idea why but. :D Dangggg hot! (Post-coital watersports would have been absolutely lovely too heheh.)

(I'm on my phone so excuse all the typos and formatting mistakes. /o\)

Date: 2012-11-08 01:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterburn.livejournal.com
Thank you! I think everyone thinks about weird stuff during intimate moments LOL idk, takes the pressure off (no pun intended, considering context XD)

Usually when I write watersports it addresses the kink in a completely different way - usually it delves into aspects of humiliation, public or otherwise, but I kind of didn't want to go there with HoMin. I guess this is more about the psychology of it rather than actual porn. gdi should just have written porn! XDDD

Post-coital watersports, I never considered that - intriiiiiguing! :D

Date: 2012-11-08 05:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] haeym.livejournal.com
I always then try to stifle my laughter and I probably look like an idiot which makes me want to laugh even harder. Gah. :D

Anyways yeah, I think many watersports fics often include the humiliation aspect and I don't really see it fit for a Homin fic? It makes either or maybe even both of them OOC. It's really nice to read fics like this which are actually really dirty yet they deal with such psychological undertones at the same time. 'D PWP is always good tho ahem.

That's actually what I first had in mind, if I had written this. :D

Date: 2012-10-16 09:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doovlynsidhe.livejournal.com
Only you could take a kink that usually sends me running for the hills and make it just....so...arhgljf;dkjg.

You are one of the best things to happen to HoMin. *__*

Date: 2012-10-17 07:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterburn.livejournal.com
Thank you for giving it a go even though it's not a kink that interests you :)

Date: 2012-10-16 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] diagon.livejournal.com
Oh my, I do love me a matter-of-fact Changmin.
From the very first line both the fic and Changmin himself is so practical and determined.

It's an interesting twist in this one that its from the point of view of the character who doesn't have the mental journey to take the reader along with - takes me back to the conversations about pov being best from the person who has the most to lose, and despite Changmin being resolute, he technically has the most to lose because his confidence is feed by his assurance that he can talk Yunho around... but maybe he won't.

And we really need to see Yunho having to be talked around to add to the deliciousness push-and-pull when he finally gives in.

By making the watersports sound easy and sensible, Changmin gives Yunho enough to spark the inner conflict that he needs to get excited enough to give in.

I love how that sort of determination that Changmin shows is reflected in Yunho once he makes his mind up and starts to drink the beer in preparation.

For me the hottest scene isn't the bath-tub - it's Changmin biting and nibbling on Yunho's neck and ears by the toilet. You probably guessed I was going to say that. I'm going to say it again: Changmin biting and licking and nibbling on Yunho's neck is hot, no matter what else he's doing, but the combination of teeth and a controlling hand being the thing that pushes Yunho over is very, very nice.

I was also impressed with the use of water all the way through - from helping to ease the cut, to the boiling kettle, the unfurling curl of the tomato skins in the bowl, through to the teasing run of the tap while Yunho first tries to pee, and then the flush of the loo and finally the shower and the bath cleaning, both. Very clever.

I want to write more - there's a lot to say both because of, and despite, the kink, but I also want to watch the Great British Bake-Off final before I get ruined with spoilers. I am SOOO rock'n roll, you would not believe.

But thank you for creating and delivering characters who are just as powerful and compelling as the kink itself. Stories like this often put all the focus on the shock of the act, but you've balanced the shock factor with the love and compromise and trust that signifies a truly great relationship - and reading Yunho and Changmin so into each other is never going to not make me mush.

Date: 2012-10-17 07:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterburn.livejournal.com
Thank you - ah, good point about the POV; this would be so different if it were from Yunho's POV but I liked the chance to poke at the baldness (or boldness, or both) of Changmin's matter-of-fact approach.

I knew you were going to say that bit. Probably the bit I like best too. And thank you for noticing the recurrent water theme! Plus I wanted the juxtaposition of food prep with discussion of bodily waste product, which comes together in the line Changmin says about drinking urine for health, and also Yunho and the drop of blood blahblahblah. Observe my over-thinking stylistic tendencies.

Okay now going to watch Bake-Off \o/

Date: 2012-10-17 01:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iadoreblue.livejournal.com
ahhh i'm not really into watersports and i don't know what compel me to read this. but besides the fact that yunho piss on changmin, i quite like the dynamics of this fic. idk what else to say. i guess that you'll a awesome author who made me read something i'm not comfortable with and see pass that, not that you need validation from me. hmmm i'm kind of awkward or sometimes too ramble-y, when it comes to comments. but thanks for writing.

Date: 2012-10-17 07:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterburn.livejournal.com
Thank you for reading this even though you're not interested in the kink aspect - you're braver than me, no matter who writes it there are certain things I just cannot read, so I really do appreciate that you could see past what made you uncomfortable and gave it a try anyway :)

XD

Date: 2012-10-17 10:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] badhand02.livejournal.com
Everything has it's first time... and yes this was mine too, just like the boys. Thank you for amazing and just enough of great introduction for the kink that I never even consider. now come to think of it I'm kinda into all that knotting and claiming kink. maybe I always had a thing for this kind in me... in some ways without realizing? Anyway, just as always i love how you made connection, between intimacy and sexual fantasy, so very believable and natural. I also like it this was although very new to the boys, they didn't make a big deal out of it... I liked that everyday atmosphere. Just something this couple try, nothing too huge. I did enjoy reading this. thank you!

Date: 2012-10-17 03:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterburn.livejournal.com
Thank you ^^ Actually my first time writing M/M watersports, the other 3 I've written were M/F or F/F and more in a D/s context, so this was a very different take on it for me, making it more of natural thing and not a big deal, as you pointed out. Thank you for your thoughts!

Date: 2012-10-17 02:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yangguifei17.livejournal.com
i read your stories and have so much to say after them.

then i read through the comments, scream a bit, "YES YES THAT EXACTLY!!!" and then realize that I no longer have anything to say because I feel like so many others before me have already said it, and so much more eloquently.

in the end, i really appreciated how you took a kink that is so often perversely fetishsized to an extreme degree and placed it in a setting where it is more than an act, more like an exchange.

ugh, excuse the word vomit. VOM. it was glorious.

Date: 2012-10-17 04:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterburn.livejournal.com
Thank you, I'm really glad the normalcy of the setting made this work for you :) And thank you for taking the time to comment ^^

Date: 2012-10-17 09:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zelshamada.livejournal.com
Amazing this! Really. Normally, reading about waterspots is not my thing, nevertheless, the way you narrated the whole story impressed me. Is a polemic topic but I think is more about what Changmin said ("Degrading? Humiliating?) more than the act itself.

I think that what I loved the most here is the way both Changmin and Yunho let go of something. Yunho: inhibitions, Changmin: his emotional truth. I loved that both knew what the other needed to be comfortable. Their communication is the best, really.

Thank you so much for this! I believe that you made a great input for the kink. You gave it an approachable way to be described without being outright shocking or just a unconventional kink. Your work is very, very good.

^^ Again, thank you!

Date: 2012-10-18 02:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterburn.livejournal.com
Thank you, I really like your interpretation of the fic, that they both let go of something other than the obvious. That's a great way of looking at it - thank you!

Date: 2012-10-20 06:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chocolet89.livejournal.com
I have to say, I'm not a big fan of watersports at all LOL but I just had to read this fic and just ... wow ;A; I love this <3 how do you make it sound so sexy hahahaha XD ♥

Date: 2012-10-20 07:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterburn.livejournal.com
Thank you :)

Date: 2012-10-20 04:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] acornmama.livejournal.com
I'm going to go with interesting. Different for them. Maybe not so out there, eventually they were going to head toward more different and "specialized".
Soooo, not a fan of water sports myself, it was definitely intteresting to see Changmin's reasoning.

Date: 2012-10-20 04:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterburn.livejournal.com
Thank you for giving it a try. It was my first time writing M/M watersports and that's what this fandom and a lot of these prompts, especially the kink meme prompts, have been about for me - doing something different and challenging myself. But I'm glad it's almost over tbh. Only two more fics to go \o/

Date: 2012-10-20 04:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] changmin-amour.livejournal.com
Defeat sags the resolute set of Yunho’s shoulders. “I’m not sure. It seems...”

“Degrading? Humiliating?” Changmin tilts his head and smiles. “It’s not. It won’t be. Not between us.”

^ thattt. You totally took something that I am not attracted to at alll, and made me see how it can be attractive. Does this even makes sense, otl.
Anyway, only fic of this that i've read, only because it was by you, and i'm glad i did. Because there's so much more to this fic than just an unusual kink.

One part i was a bit confused about- they seem to be a couple, in love, living together- but they don't sleep together ?

Date: 2012-10-20 04:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterburn.livejournal.com
Thank you for giving it a try :) Ah, about the sleeping separately thing, that's just because we know that Yunho and Changmin share an apartment but have their own rooms, and considering how messy Yunho is, I think Changmin would still want to maintain some kind of separate space!

Date: 2012-10-22 07:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yunhominji94.livejournal.com
*dies* First of all let me say welcome back from your trip. I haven't been on LJ in a while and today is the first day of signing in and checking things. So I wanted to welcome you back one of my favorite if not fave HoMin writer. This... I just- I've already read two other fics like this. Why did I read them even though it clearly states its watersports and that makes me go D: well it's oddly and sadly simple. It's usually written by good writers that I adore. And you are no exception. XD I was like OMG new fic from glitterburn *sees prompt* WAE!? D8 *doesnt like watersports* But I read it anyways. I'm such a complete sucker for your fics. Why... Why are you so awesome at this!? (9*^*)9 Lol well anyways it wasn't that bad.. HoMin is an exception if not only exception when it comes to weird kinks. Changmin's reason for wanting Yunho to do that to him was sweet in an oddly romantic way. XD;;; idk if that makes sense but yeah. So let me just shut up now before I embarrass myself any further. I can't wait to read that other fic for the November month. It's gonna be available soon right? Bye lovely author~ ^(*・。・)ノ~~~βyё βyё♪

Date: 2012-10-22 08:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterburn.livejournal.com
Thank you :) LOL watersports is a kink that really seems to divide people, but that's the nature of kink. There's things I absolutely will not read, no matter who wrote it or how good it is, so thank you for reading something you knew you wouldn't enjoy (er....? that sounds weird! You know what I mean!)

I might switch the November fic, I'm not sure yet. Suddenly there's a lot of not very good family stuff happening so I've had to dump two fics I wanted to do before the end of the year because I just don't have the time now :/ But there will be something up by November!

Date: 2012-10-22 07:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yunhominji94.livejournal.com
Lol I know what you mean. And ah I see. Well there's no need to rush if there's family stuff going on then you don't have to worry about it. ^_^ But no matter what I'll be waiting for your November fic. Either that one or whichever one you pick. ( ⌒o⌒)人(⌒-⌒ )v

Date: 2012-10-24 06:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cassaria.livejournal.com
Watersports.....really not my thing...but I just had to give this a chance because I had to see how you would write Changmin in this.

I was not disappointed. Mainly I loved this because Changmin is so needy and I really liked how Yunho wasn't all up for it in the beginning but gave it a try in the end (I like to think it's because he eventually gives in to anything that Changmin will demand sooner or later :P).

I just love Changmin in this. Basically I love all the Changmins that you write. There's just /something/ about the way you characterize Changmin that just draws me to them. It's addicting, I tell you!!

Date: 2012-10-24 09:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterburn.livejournal.com
Thank you for giving it a try even though it's not a kink that interests you. LOL I agree with you, Yunho will *always* give in, he's just a ball of mush for his Changminnie ♥

Date: 2012-11-04 09:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] almond86.livejournal.com
Ah! Leave it to you to take something that would usually make my insides churn and actually turn it into something endearing and acceptable even if only for that one moment...

Defeat sags the resolute set of Yunho’s shoulders. “I’m not sure. It seems...”

“Degrading? Humiliating?” Changmin tilts his head and smiles. “It’s not. It won’t be. Not between us.”


That is exactly how I think of it so when I read that, I found myself yelling "YES! YES! EXACTLY" at the screen lol..

“I want it,” Changmin says softly. “I want the warmth of it, hot and fresh. I want what was inside of you to splash all over me. I want the scent of it. I want to be covered in it, as if you’re marking me. Like a possessive thing, like animals do. It’s sexy, Yun. It’s so sexy, being claimed in such a primal way.”

Well if you put it that way..

This is why I trust your writing blindly (however if I ever see hardcore BDSM, bloodwork or JaeMin next to your name, that's where I draw a line o_0)..the emotions come through real strong that it justifies whatever situation you put the characters in...

Maybe it's HoMin..maybe it's your writing..but I genuinely like it..love how direct Changmin is..and how determined Yunho is..and as I always say and is always the case with this pair in your writing I absolutely love how comfortable they are with each other in their relationship..just the fact that Changmin felt comfortable enough even if in a sense and trusted that he could tell Yunho of his desire is endearing (^_^)

Said it before and will say it again..you truly are a writer after my own heart ❤

“It’s not dirty,” Changmin says, anticipating that line of argument. “Some people advocate drinking urine for health reasons.”

uhh..whatever you say Changminnie 0_o *side eyes the door*

Date: 2012-11-04 12:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterburn.livejournal.com
Thank you! Especially for giving this a try when you don't like the kink, I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts :) LOL no worries, I will never, ever write JaeMin or YunJae or anything like that, I have zero interest in that direction!

Date: 2012-11-06 04:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] almond86.livejournal.com
I will never, ever write JaeMin or YunJae or anything like that, I have zero interest in that direction!

babe...I'm this close to proposing to you...

Date: 2012-11-06 07:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterburn.livejournal.com
ROFL! I'm very flattered. And my spouse is amused ;)

Date: 2012-11-06 08:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trieze0713.livejournal.com
Errrm... wow! LOL That's all I can say... Nothing like I ever read so far but somehow I didn't feel completely disgusted with the way you tell it hahaha Wow!

Date: 2012-11-06 09:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterburn.livejournal.com
Thank you! Changmin is very matter-of-fact about most things so why not about this too LOL

Date: 2012-11-08 09:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aamuzz.livejournal.com
WOW! This is so mind-blowing. That's all I could say. Awesome !!

Date: 2012-11-08 01:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterburn.livejournal.com
Thank you ^^

Date: 2012-11-12 06:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nyansuju.livejournal.com
oh god oh god I just read every single one of your homin fanfics and I can't how are you so perf???? I just can't. Your writing is so clean and awesome and your characterizations are spot on and alsknfalskfnlaskfn really incoherent right now but ugh. everything about your writing is perfect and i ship homin so hard it physically hurts because of you (which is a good thing). Thank you.

Date: 2012-11-13 03:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterburn.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed reading them!

Date: 2012-11-17 07:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trish3815.livejournal.com
I am not sure how I missed this one..

not sure if that is my thing but only you could write this about HoMin and make it come out so hot and sexy!!! I always love me some HoMin no matter what they are doing!!

Date: 2012-11-20 05:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterburn.livejournal.com
Thank you for reading this even though the kink doesn't interest you :)

Date: 2012-12-07 01:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] isimplicityy.livejournal.com
Sigh... another good comment lost at the very moment that I was finished with it T___T.

So uhm... I'm going to try and recall what I wrote... but I wrote too much to even remember a little bit T___T. Let's see how it goes...

I can't believe I missed over 2 months of fics from you. I didn't realize that you had stopped cross posting on HoMin YWH so I thought you were on some break or something. Then I saw a fic of yours being recommended on homin-recced and then I realized how fail I was for the past 2 and a half months OTL.

Anyway, I wish I had time to read the Tree Frog fic but I won't be able to for the next few hours. I wanted to read it in one go so yea... I'll be holding that off.

I wasn't going to read this one either because I'm not a fan of watersports, at all. But then I read the small preview and I couldn't help but think about how cute Yunho's reaction was to Changmin's suggestion, if you may. So yea I ended up reading this anyway ^^. Love the way that Changmin's personality shines through in this fic. He's always so blunt with his words, which makes him so intriguing to me. I especially liked the moments when Changmin tried to use cooking as a distraction from the subject, when he interrupted Yunho's bathroom time, and when he persuaded Yunho to accept the idea. Minnie has such a way with words that Yunho can't refuse ^^. The ending was super adorable haha. Imagining Changmin clinging to Yunho was super cute, though hard to come by haha. I adore how this experience is like a chapter to their relationship. Finding different ways to show their affections towards each other and ways to just "let go". Pun fully intended ♥ ^^

I'm going to have to follow your journal more closely if I don't want to miss an update. Can I add you? (:

Date: 2012-12-07 05:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterburn.livejournal.com
It's so annoying when LJ swallows comments, it's been happening a lot to me recently - wish they'd stop mucking about with it :/ Anyway, thank you for taking the time to type out your comment again, it's very kind of you ^^

Thanks for giving this a go even though you don't like watersports. I tried a different approach with this one - usually when I wrote watersports it's pretty much just porn, but that didn't feel right with these boys, so I wanted a bit more to it.

You can add me if you want - I'm about to post a new fic once I reply to your other comment, but as you know I'm not going to be writing for the fandom past the end of the year so if you'd prefer to just check back, it's no problem. Or add me for this month and then un-add me! It's all good :D

Date: 2012-12-21 05:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] threewalls.livejournal.com
This is really wonderful. They're adorable.

Date: 2012-12-21 06:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterburn.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2013-06-25 05:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kuroudidae.livejournal.com
Man i'm not even into watersports but this was some good shit
Edited Date: 2013-06-25 05:04 am (UTC)

Date: 2013-06-25 04:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitterburn.livejournal.com
Thanks. I'm not into it either but it's an interesting kink to write about ^^

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